Sunday, April 20, 2008

audra: new image







still have some work to do on this one... evening out the sky a little bit. but this image is about the overuse of plastic bags... hence the clouds. 

does it need to be a little clearer/spelled out more obviously? 
can anyone think of a title that still relays my fantastical/fairy tale ideas behind it?


thanks guys.

2 comments:

Shawn Chamberlin said...

i really like the concept of this photograph, i did something really similar to this in the past with recycled waste and ocean creatures. the image is out nicely, i think you need a little more saturation, the green and model seem a little bland. the plastic bags need more work on the masking, i would use a brush thats softer, with a lower opacity and go around the edges, just so they dont look so sharp on the edges, it doesn't look well when you blend that way.

as far as titles go, i've always had trouble with that too, that'd be why most of my photos are still "untitled".

PughSeniorPortfolio said...

I also really enjoy this concept, it definitely shows that you are thinking outside of the box. I like the composition of the second pic, but I do think the plastic bags/clouds need to be a little more obvious, but this opinion may only be because I am not seeing it as the size you intend. Either way, you are definitely making great progress, great job!